Contents page second draft

The first draft had a great deal of empty space so I decided to include an editors note which is conventional for a magazine contents page. I made the voucher slightly smaller and moved it to the left of the page to fit the editors note along the right side of it. I also added a red dotted line around the edge of the voucher with a symbol of some scissors to indicate that it was to be cut out to use it. I also changed the text on the voucher to make it suit the sellers more; I changed the 'colour of your choice' to 'range of colours' because they would not be able to give any colour a customer wanted, there would be a certain set of colours available. Also, I included 'Promotion valid while stocks last' because if the shop was to run out of the product the offer would end before the 31st May and they would be promising a customer something they cannot give. Furthermore, I included subheadings for the page numbers and titles to improve the look of the page by making it more organised and easier to navigate around. I also included some autoshapes of stars to fill some empty space and to make it look more girly. Finally, I cropped the main image so there was not any unnecessary space around the image.

Second draft: