With all the different coloured text boxes the page looked like there was too much going on and was beginning to get confusing. It was hard to read as it had lost its organisation and columns. Therefore, I decided to keep the different colours but get rid of the boxes, reintroducing the columns. Also, I included some bullet points to get a mixture of styles to keep the reader interested. Furthermore, more of the images I had taken were included to prevent the whole page from being text and to break it up a bit more. Finally, I included a banner along the top and bottom to fill some of the empty space.
Second draft:
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