Front cover final draft

I noticed there was still room for improvement so created a third draft of the front cover. I decided that the guide should be renamed from the 'Ultimate female guide to festival survival' to the 'Ultimate girls' guide to festival survival' to create more of an alliteration effect and too make it sound more catching. Furthermore, I decided to link the tagline to the guide's title by changing it from 'Essentially for females' to 'Essential, for girls'. The price and date still seemed too large so I made these slightly smaller once again and moved the date so it is directly above the price so the page looks more organised. On the banner for advertising the guide there was a lot of empty space so I made the font of the line at the bottom smaller so it fitted into one line and included an autoshape of a star to make it look more girl orientated. Also, the advertisement in the bottom banner was not clear as to what the voucher was offering so I cut some of the text out and made it more to the point. Finally, I made the text in the puff more readable and so that it fitted with the rest of the fonts on the page. I also centred the '101' giving a clearer layout.

Third draft of front cover: